Weight Just A Minute!

You think
You say
You feel that I’m too skinny

I think
I say
I know that I’m all right with me

Could it possibly be
You’re so insecure
That you take your frustration
Out on me?

Maybe you’re too fat
By your own standards
I’m just saying
Your weight isn’t an issue
Not in my mind
According to me
You look just fine…

Observations

rawdawgbuffalo (?) August 25, 2008

what do u feel about yourself is the question

meleah rebeccah (?) August 25, 2008

that was awesome

MarvalusOne (?) August 25, 2008

Very real…

Eb (?) August 26, 2008

Niiiiicccceee

Natural (?) August 26, 2008

cool a poem about me and my thiness. nice work dan-sean. i can see jill scott reading/singing this

sdg1844 (?) August 28, 2008

In a nutshell. I like it.

mysTery (?) August 28, 2008

Lol, nice.
Short and sweet!

Ms. Q (?) September 1, 2008

Nice! and I agree with Natural – can imagine it being sung!

dan-sean mankind (?) September 6, 2008

Thanks to everyone for your comments and feedback. Just to note, this poem had nothing to do with me being insecure about my weight. It basically speaks to those who have issues with their weight; those people who attempt to make others feel bad about themselves instead of changing what it is that they aren’t pleased with regarding their own bodies…

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