New York Summers: A Haiku

By on April 25, 2008 @ 12:00 am

New York Summers: A Haiku

My fire escape
an urban terrace to serve
fresh barbecue from

– The Orange Phoenix

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meleah rebeccah April 25, 2008

excellent

dejanae411 April 25, 2008

lol

haikuin it
good look

The Orange Phoenix April 25, 2008

you know you’re a child of the city when. . .

Thanks for the feedback ya’ll

Ricardo April 27, 2008

I’m really hungry now that I read about the barbecue.

Lavenderbay April 30, 2008

This is a great haiku! Didn’t know there was an accompanying photo till I opened the page just now. The poem stands alone fine, but the pair work together too, neither medium overpowering the other.

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